tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4334919750236935394.post3937321688525002269..comments2023-08-27T07:25:11.735-04:00Comments on Project Write: Words of a RevolutionProjectwritehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00516514688775961518noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4334919750236935394.post-49219502458447251082017-08-02T22:58:16.130-04:002017-08-02T22:58:16.130-04:00Not everyone was free. We had a lot of growing up...Not everyone was free. We had a lot of growing up to do first. I like you line, "Eager to embark on this long awaited adventure." If we look at the history of this country as an adventure, it makes a clearer picture. We may have won the war but we were not fair in our goal to fulfill our dreams. We often took what was not ours from the natives and almost destroyed them. MRS E.noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4334919750236935394.post-46385997259488307272017-08-02T22:57:34.296-04:002017-08-02T22:57:34.296-04:00Hi, Paul;
In reading your piece entitled:"wor...Hi, Paul;<br />In reading your piece entitled:"words of a Revolution" I couldn`t resist thinking about the Founders of the United States and how they may have felt immediately after the end of the War for Independence. I love the sentence that reads "with a world of water between us and yesterday`s suffering" I appreciate the way in which you convey the hope that comes with Revolution.Ranger Larrynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4334919750236935394.post-24879284964266445512017-08-02T21:42:15.469-04:002017-08-02T21:42:15.469-04:00This poem reminds me about how powerful certain wo...This poem reminds me about how powerful certain words are in the American lexicon - freedom, revolution, independence, opportunity. These are words that permeate the American experience.Bethany Silvahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13084037771537552836noreply@blogger.com