Hello Project Write friends, family and fans!
We kicked off our 2019 summer camp today with a visit to the Liberty Bell and a Pantoum Poem activity. A pantoum poem is a type of found poem. In our case, students blended lines they read in the Liberty Bell Center with phrases and comments they overheard from other guests and visitors. The 'found' lines were then arranged into 4-stanza poems following a specific set of guidelines. Check out our writers' work and I think you'll agree that they created some powerful pieces!
Carlyne McGurk
As strong and durable as the bell seems . . . it is fragile and easily damaged.
Like that of liberty itself.
Look at the words at the top
Proclaim liberty throughout all the land onto the inhabitants thereof
Like that of liberty itself
How loud is too loud?
Proclaim liberty throughout all the land onto the inhabitants thereof
It just echoes a lot
How loud is too loud?
I want to get closer to it
It just echoes a lot
Get closer, look around
I want to get closer to it
Look at the words at the top
Get closer, look around
As strong and durable as the bell seems . .. it is fragile and easily damaged.
Erin Kang
The world famed liberty bell
Ring it till the young arise
That the whole world shall be free
That’s cool, right?
Ring it till the young arise
Just wandering around
That’s cool, right?
Where is the trash can?
Just wandering around
Thank you
Where is the trash can?
Smile
Thank you
That the whole world shall be free
Smile
The world famed liberty bell
Emma Harding
It is very fragile and easily damaged
A very significant symbol
Ring it till the slave be free!
Did you kick them off?
A very significant symbol
This way!
Did you kick them off?
Come here!
This way!
That hurts!
Come here!
Say thank you
That hurts!
Ring it till the slave be free!
Say thank you
It is fragile and easily damaged.
Clair Cardea
A very significant symbol for the entire democratic world
It’s so crowded here - the bell sure is popular
Ring loud that hallowed bell . . . ring it till the slave be free
You just wanna see it right away, huh?
It’s so crowded here - the bell sure is popular
I don’t see a gift shop
You just wanna see it right away, huh?
. . . . for freedom sleeps on freedom’s shore
I don’t see a gift shop
I wanna take pictures but I’ll be in the way
For freedom sleeps on freedom’s shore
Go ahead. Look, everyone’s taking pictures
I wanna take pictures but I’ll be in the way
Ring loud that hallowed bell . . . ring it til the slave be free
Go ahead. Look, everyone’s taking pictures
A very significant symbol for the entire democratic world.
Trevon West
Yo seed!
Take this flick
Thank you
You too can help
Take this flick
What are you guys looking at?
You too can help
Just in case you lose your balance
What are you guys looking at?
Proclaim liberty!
Just in case you lose your balance
Even the young people don’t have trouble
Proclaim liberty!
Thank you
Even the young people don’t have trouble
Yo seed!
Allen K. Jones, Jr.
Liberty bell cheesesteaks
Including liberty bells
Pass and stow
Take this flick
Including liberty nails
You a goat
Take this pick
Assembly like Benjamin Franklin
You a joke
Taking photos
Assembly like John Adams
Bell is hidden
Taking Fotos
Fast andslow
Bell is driven
Liberty bell cheesesteaks
Lucas Jackson
Take this flick
Wait up son
So this is the liberty bell
This guy is the true son of liberty
Wait up son
The liberty bell attracted huge crowds
This guy is the true son of liberty
The liberty bell is a ‘very significant symbol’
The liberty bell attracted huge crowds
It’s really cool
The liberty bell is a ‘very significant symbol’
Liberty translates into many languages
It’s really cool
So this is the liberty bell
Wait up son
Take this flick
Jamie Gibson
Big bells, little bells, books about the bell
Ring it again
Glorious old bell
No one can touch the bell?
Ring it again
The son of the revolutionary bows in reverence before you
No one can touch the bell?
It’s more than it’s cracked up to be
Let’s see the pictures
Is that the original?
It’s more than it’s cracked up to be
It’s strong but fragile
Is that the original?
Glorious old bell
It’s strong but fragile
Big bells, little bells, books about bells
Cora Mueller
Every fairminded man believes in justice
A sacred relic, a useful symbol
It’s very impressive
Feel free to get closer
A sacred relic, a useful symbol
Somehow it got bigger
Feel free to get closer
But where are you?
Somehow it got bigger
If you go you can’t come back
But where are you?
For liberties gained can also be lost
If you go you can’t come back
It’s very impressive
For liberties gained can also be lost
Every fairminded man believes in justice
Claudia Messer
The never ending quest for freedom
Till every living soul be stirred, clothed with strength
The son of a revolutionary soldier bows in reverence before you
How did it get its crack?
Till every living soul be stirred, clothed with strength
Can I take a picture?
How did it get its crack?
Please hold your pictures
Can I get a picture?
A symbol for freedom and peace
Please hold your pictures
A symbol for freedom and peace
A symbol for freedom and peace
The son of a revolutionary soldier bows in reverence before you
A symbol for freedom and peace
The never ending quest for freedom
Nelly Forrest
Ring loud the hallowed bell!
Mama
You guys are so much fun
The bell’s more than it’s cracked up to be
Mama
Liberty throughout the land, to all the inhabitants thereof
The bell’s more than it’s cracked up to be
Are you guys looking for the real liberty bell?
Liberty throughout the land, to all the inhabitants thereof
Men and women, black and white, coming together to advocate for freedom
Are you guys looking for the liberty bell?
See the bell? Big bell
Men and women, black and white, coming together to advocate for freedom
You guys are so much fun
See the bell? Big bell
Ring loud that hallowed bell!
Sanae Young
The original liberty bell announced the creation of democracy
Taking pictures so she can read later
A very significant symbol
I don’t need a picture
Taking pictures so she can read later
The women’s liberty bell will announce the completion of democracy
I don’t see a picture
Where is it?
The women’s liberty bell will announce the completion of democracy
We are all together
Where is it?
We don’t need it.
We are all together
A very significant symbol
We don’t need it
The original liberty bell announced the creation of democracy
Brielle Watson-Wood
Fathers and mothers with babies in arms
Take pictures and look later
To go back
We were lucky
Take pictures and look back
I’d like to go back
We were lucky
Did you hear?
I’d like to come back
Taxation without representation is tyranny
Did you hear?
The liberty bell?
Taxation without representation is tyranny
Go back
To the liberty bell
Fathers and mothers with babies in arms
Zuza Jevremovic
I had one of these growing up
Its tongue is now silent
I can see a picture anytime
I felt that
Its tongue is now silent
Ring, ring! Grandfather, ring!
I felt that.
Spring gladly toward the kindling skies.
Ring, ring! Grandfather, ring!
One more picture!
Spring gladly toward kindling skies
Right behind us.
One more picture!
I can see a picture anytime
Right behind us
I had one of these growing up.
Melanie Sporn
Cracked and imperfect
She fought for freedom
Do what you want!
Her efforts have been rewarded!
She fought for freedom
I appreciate it
Her efforts have been rewarded
So proclaim liberty!
I appreciate it
Thumbs up
Proclaim liberty!
By order of the assembly
Thumbs up
Do what you want!
By order of the assembly
Cracked and imperfect
Amanda Schear
Liberty itself is an ongoing process
Don't you want to see who made it?
No se puede
Do you want me to take a picture?
Don't you want to see who made it?
File past the sacred relic
Do you want me to take a picture?
You just wanna go see it right away
File past the sacred relic
I was trying to get a picture of what it looks like inside
You just wanna go see it right away
Liberty translates into many languages
I was trying to get a picture of what it looks like inside
No se puede
Liberty translates into many languages
Liberty itself is an ongoing process